About This Book
A shut-in uses virtual reality to escape reality only to discover that, yes, virtual reality is the best reality.
Commentary
📏 Rules Identified
A variety of '80s dance moves
Ep. 1 @ 0:16:01"Give the reader some level of detail to visualize the scene you're painting."
One Of Us
Ep. 1 @ 0:18:58"To be believable, characters should not all be the same."
Trucks Carrying Goods and Workers
Ep. 1 @ 0:21:35"Good world-building requires thinking out the consequences of your operating premises and having them thoroughly inform the rest of your story."
The Fleisch-Kincaid Factor
Ep. 1 @ 22:45"Write at the level your audience is comfortable reading."
Put Away The Soapbox
Ep. 1 @ 26:20"Characters Should Express Their Opinions, Not Yours"
One Of Me
Ep. 2 @ 0:21:41"Don't make all your characters you"
Get Out Of The House
Ep. 2 @ 26:14"Creativity Requires Input"
Like An Anvil! No Wait: An Atomic Bomb!
Ep. 2 @ 26:35"Pick A Metaphor And Stick To It"
A Whole Lot Of References
Ep. 2 @ 29:40"Making a list is not writing"
Where Does The Time Go?
Ep. 2 @ 35:05"Expertise Is Bounded By Lived Hours"
An Almost Preternatural Gift For International Finance
Ep. 2 @ 40:40"A Character's Natural Talents Must Be Judiciously Granted"
Hairy-Knuckled Chucks
Ep. 3 @ 17:55"Don't betray your underlying premise"
What I Can Only Describe As
Ep. 3 @ 1:10:01"Don't Announce Your Limitations To The Readers"
And The Beat Goes On...And On...And On...
Ep. 3 @ 35:28"A compelling narrative requires an increase in intensity"
All That We But See or Seem
Ep. 3 @ 59:11"Don't substitute vagueness for depth"
Why Do We Need To Know This?
Ep. 4 @ 13:00"Describe Only Necessary Technology And Only As Much As Is Necessary"
Time Makes Fools Of Us All
Ep. 4 @ 14:20"Attend To How You Describe Time"
Classic Classic Classic Classic Classic Classic Classic Classic
Ep. 5 @ 42:47"Eschew semantic satiation"
Stop Trying On Hats
Ep. 5 @ 51:51"Characters Must Treat Urgent Situations Urgently"
I wasn't really sure, and I didn't really care
Ep. 6 @ 1:13:13"If you describe potential tension only to immediately defuse it, you've just wasted the reader's time."
My bullet bill is gonna be huge!
Ep. 6 @ 29:05"Action requires stakes."
He already had the codes!
Ep. 7 @ 19:20"Excitement requires the existence and persistence of challenging obstacles."
Reality is real
Ep. 8 @ 1:04:04"Morals are for fables."
You're The Author
Ep. 8 @ 30:15"Use the contrivance that most easily enables you to communicate the story."
Flatcap Bleriana'd Chekov's Condom
Ep. 8 @ 33:20"Don't set up things without paying them off."
🎯 Milestones
First Review of Reviews
Ep. 0"The Pole Vault Championship of the Entire Universe" released
Ep. 1"The Sentence Song" Debuts
Ep. 2Fan Fic...or Real?
Ep. 3Stealing People's Mail Premieres
Ep. 3Hell Of A Rig
Ep. 3First "Leaked Scene"
Ep. 4First Jackal FanFic
Ep. 5I don't eat curly fries.
Ep. 6Authorship of the 372 Page theme song
Ep. 71980s Reference
Ep. 8🔗 Connections
None identified yet.
🏆 As Good As?
"I don't want to go as far as to say, like, the "Road House" of a bad book but..."

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